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Dear Hiring Manager at Con Edison, 

I am excited to apply for the Computer Aide Temp Coops – College Students program at Con Edison. As a student at CUNY City College pursuing a major in Computer Science, I am excited to bring in my work ethnic, technical skills, and customer service experiences to support Con Edison’s goal of shaping the future to becoming a cleaner and greener planet. 

In my current position as a part-time employee at BookoffUSA, I have developed a strong work ethnic that requires valuable skills in customer service, transaction management, and problem-solving. We use software applications like Word and Excel to organize our sales and manage our cash flow.  

Previously, as a volunteer for Japan Fest and Anime NYC, I successfully managed large crowds of over 10,000 attendees while coordinating with teams and providing effective communication. These experiences taught me to stay organized, be flexible, and prioritize tasks in high-pressure environments.Together with my strong interpersonal skills, it would enable me to collaborate effectively with fellow employees and customers while contributing to Con Edison’s mission.

Thank you for considering my application. I would like the chance to learn more about Con Edison’s mission for a cleaner future, and how to use the skills that I learned from previous experiences, like problem solving, communication, and adaptability to help achieve the goal of a greener planet. 

Sincerely, 

Justin Mei

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Hiring Manager
Con Edison
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Dear Hiring Manager,

I am excited to apply for the Computer Aide Temp Coops – College Students (IT Majors) position at Con Edison. As a Computer Science student at CUNY City College with a strong foundation in problem-solving, technical skills, and a passion for innovative solutions, I am eager to contribute to your efforts in advancing clean energy technology and infrastructure.

During my academic and professional journey, I have developed a blend of technical and interpersonal skills that align with the requirements of this role:

  • Technical Proficiency: I am proficient in Python, HTML, CSS, and Microsoft Office Suite, enabling me to handle data analysis, forecasting, and operational support tasks effectively.
  • Customer Service & Teamwork: My experience as a sales associate at BookOffUSA and as event staff at Anime NYC has honed my ability to manage logistics, resolve complex challenges, and communicate effectively with diverse teams.
  • Project Management Experience: As a production assistant for a thesis film project at CUNY Brooklyn College, I coordinated timelines and resources, ensuring seamless project execution—skills directly transferable to supporting Con Edison’s strategic initiatives.

I am drawn to Con Edison’s commitment to sustainability and clean energy innovation, as it resonates with my values and desire to contribute to impactful projects. I am particularly excited about the opportunity to engage in meaningful assignments, expand my technical expertise, and collaborate with professionals dedicated to a cleaner energy future.

I would welcome the opportunity to bring my skills and enthusiasm to Con Edison’s coop program. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of contributing to your team and would be happy to discuss how my background aligns with your needs.

Sincerely,

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